This is my cover letter, In the letter I am applying for a graphic design job that I saw on careerbuilder.com.
http://www.mediafire.com/?dwjln2nyruz
-Zach Pedley
Sunday, January 17, 2010
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Course Blog for COLI 211Z: Graduate School and Job Applications @ Binghamton University (online), Winter 2010.
I personally think that you should add more details in your skills and the experiences that you had as a Graphic Designer.
ReplyDeleteOverall, it looks good but I have some suggestions. I'm a graphic design major as well. I think you should add informations about portfolio. Also, you should specify the skills more clearly.
ReplyDeleteThere wasn't many details in your cover letter. You should include some more things off your resume and some more details on skills relevant to the position you're seeking. It sounds like a short response to a question during an interview, while not bad, but, not something prevalent in most cover letters.
ReplyDelete-Ae Rhee Chung
I agree with a lot of the responses here. I think you have a great basis to start with. I think you should go more in depth and give examples of your skills. You should talk more in detail about the specific skills you have and how you applied them.
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